sky
Fledgling Vampire
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Post by sky on Feb 16, 2007 13:18:49 GMT -5
the night before christmas I cut, I dream and I sleep that all it is for me many think i'm a nice guy but there is a dark side to me that no one really like to see
so sleep tonight knowing its not comeing for you so I just sleep with a smile on my face knowing that it will not show to you or any one I care about so sleep in peace while I sleep in the darkness but all you will see is the light side of me so sleep in peace
just like I have to even thow I what to show my dark side at times all well I have to say that the light side of me is good but it will be the end of me so just sleep in peace just sleep in peace while I sleep in the light when I what to sleep in darkness so just know that I wll see you there in the light soon so be lucky you are not me and have a great christmas eve in peace so said me
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crave
Impure Ghoul
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Post by crave on Feb 28, 2007 9:28:04 GMT -5
hey guys can you tell me what you think of this poem i just thought i would take one of mine and put it up i know this is one fromw hen i just started writeing them so i understand if its not good so yeah tell me what you think
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Post by Alucard on Mar 2, 2007 13:17:29 GMT -5
Oh you wrote one finally! it's good too
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sky
Fledgling Vampire
Posts: 146
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Post by sky on Mar 14, 2007 8:09:04 GMT -5
thx i will try to put more up here
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