Post by Nickcca Vamp on Aug 2, 2007 3:44:17 GMT -5
Ok This the actacl sotry that will once i wothe the manga i tough you all might like the witten ver most of it has been spell checked Mostley but it is readble i think
In a dark night of an modern day London something was amiss that night in a lonely London flat a window suddenly smashed and gun shots where heard. Inside was man and women in front of a coat from a mysterious dark figure. The man had long sliver hair with an eye patch on the left eye and wearing a red jacket with white selves and blue jeans with also brown old tauter boots, His reaming eye where odd they where red almost to much the colour of blood . The mother on the other hand had very long brown hair down to the middle of her back put into a pony tail with blue eyes with gothic patterns around them. She wear a strange red dress with on the shoulders had like those slave that clown or old medieval people would wear, The ones that are round was a spare with slits in them then all the way up to her arm she wears long white gloves her shoe they little tatty hells.
The mysterious dark figure was to hard it describe since it was in the darkest of shadows but the red eyed man smirks because he shot him “ hump human only human.” He smirks showing his fangs as you can the dark figure had been shot you can the body part missing unwell all sudden the figure heal itself. The dark figure start laughing like he gone mad and start healing up all by itself suddenly it said in clod dark but posh English voice “Only human did you say now give me the child….Jinko and Roxanne” the figure started walking slowly towards them. Behind Them was a baby bed with a baby inside it.
The man Jinko frown “Never.” He shouted tired to fire again but he run out of bullets and he pulled his katana sword and run toward him he going to slice the figure it half but it just stood until he got close then suddenly with being hit the figure stab him with an epee a type of sword and the using his other hand, he rip his head off. Blood was split everywhere on the wall on the floor the figure pull out his sword and the body landed on the floor and threw Jinko head away.
Roxanne glowed he pick up the scythe and said “you…” there a sudden salience until he her screamed “you basted I kill you.” She ran and swag her scythe at him in one go she chop his head off and body slam to the floor. She fall on the knees and huff and puffed tears came from her eyes a little think it was all but she lost her lover Jinko during the progress of protecting her child.
She dropped the weapon when she started hearing her baby crying she stood up and walked to the baby bed and pick the baby and said “ Don’t worry it all mommy here now.” He said and gave a deep sigh of sadness
Meanwhile behind her the figure she killed start to move his head regenerates his head it stood up saliency so it would not be heard and took leap from her. In one go he grab her arm pulled her towards it and then kills her by thursting his hand tought her bocy and and took her hreat out and as she fall to the ground he catch the baby. “You…young shall come with me.” The light showed its lips smirking.
The police arrived at the flat running up the stairs the dark figure heard them from a long away and choose it time to make an exit so he headed into the wall with darkest shadow and disappears by the time the police got there they was nothing more than two dead bodies no trace of the mysterious dark figure.
The next night the mysterious dark figure that now worse robs to cover the face brought the baby to old abandon church. Meet yet another dark figure standing in front of the stand. The hooded figure that killed last night said “It is done my master ….what now.” The one standing in front of the stand said In a U.S cocky Texan voice “Good very good now listen this is what I want you to do.” It said as it explains his plan to the hooded one.
[glow=red,2,300]Vamp The Lost Soul
By James Raven
(A.K.A Nickcca Vamp)
The Beginning[/glow]
By James Raven
(A.K.A Nickcca Vamp)
The Beginning[/glow]
In a dark night of an modern day London something was amiss that night in a lonely London flat a window suddenly smashed and gun shots where heard. Inside was man and women in front of a coat from a mysterious dark figure. The man had long sliver hair with an eye patch on the left eye and wearing a red jacket with white selves and blue jeans with also brown old tauter boots, His reaming eye where odd they where red almost to much the colour of blood . The mother on the other hand had very long brown hair down to the middle of her back put into a pony tail with blue eyes with gothic patterns around them. She wear a strange red dress with on the shoulders had like those slave that clown or old medieval people would wear, The ones that are round was a spare with slits in them then all the way up to her arm she wears long white gloves her shoe they little tatty hells.
The mysterious dark figure was to hard it describe since it was in the darkest of shadows but the red eyed man smirks because he shot him “ hump human only human.” He smirks showing his fangs as you can the dark figure had been shot you can the body part missing unwell all sudden the figure heal itself. The dark figure start laughing like he gone mad and start healing up all by itself suddenly it said in clod dark but posh English voice “Only human did you say now give me the child….Jinko and Roxanne” the figure started walking slowly towards them. Behind Them was a baby bed with a baby inside it.
The man Jinko frown “Never.” He shouted tired to fire again but he run out of bullets and he pulled his katana sword and run toward him he going to slice the figure it half but it just stood until he got close then suddenly with being hit the figure stab him with an epee a type of sword and the using his other hand, he rip his head off. Blood was split everywhere on the wall on the floor the figure pull out his sword and the body landed on the floor and threw Jinko head away.
Roxanne glowed he pick up the scythe and said “you…” there a sudden salience until he her screamed “you basted I kill you.” She ran and swag her scythe at him in one go she chop his head off and body slam to the floor. She fall on the knees and huff and puffed tears came from her eyes a little think it was all but she lost her lover Jinko during the progress of protecting her child.
She dropped the weapon when she started hearing her baby crying she stood up and walked to the baby bed and pick the baby and said “ Don’t worry it all mommy here now.” He said and gave a deep sigh of sadness
Meanwhile behind her the figure she killed start to move his head regenerates his head it stood up saliency so it would not be heard and took leap from her. In one go he grab her arm pulled her towards it and then kills her by thursting his hand tought her bocy and and took her hreat out and as she fall to the ground he catch the baby. “You…young shall come with me.” The light showed its lips smirking.
The police arrived at the flat running up the stairs the dark figure heard them from a long away and choose it time to make an exit so he headed into the wall with darkest shadow and disappears by the time the police got there they was nothing more than two dead bodies no trace of the mysterious dark figure.
The next night the mysterious dark figure that now worse robs to cover the face brought the baby to old abandon church. Meet yet another dark figure standing in front of the stand. The hooded figure that killed last night said “It is done my master ….what now.” The one standing in front of the stand said In a U.S cocky Texan voice “Good very good now listen this is what I want you to do.” It said as it explains his plan to the hooded one.